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No offense to anyone, but, this is such a powerful piece to me that I could give a damn about the punctuation. This is beautiful, Jim!

roger hawcroft's avatar

"I have mostly learned from reading a bunch" - me too. You have learned much for you write well and your imaginary excursions into the past must be, I think, a fertile ground for more poems.

Take care. Stay safe.

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